WIP: biological sex post

content/post/biological-sex.md

@@ -18,8 +18,8 @@ for easy linking, and to act as a sort of persistent memory of my conversations
 on this topic. If I've linked you to this page, you've probably used the term
 where I could hear you, and I am now grumpy at you. This is easily resolved -
 read the page, think carefully about its implications for what you are saying,
-and act or respond accordingly. If you think the positions or ideas on this page
+and act or respond accordingly. If you think the positions or ideas on this page -
-- either my own, or those I'm representing on behalf of others - need changes,
+either my own, or those I'm representing on behalf of others - need changes,
 let me know. We can talk about it.
 
 Anyway, what is "biological sex"?
@@ -103,7 +103,8 @@ Would that solve all these issues, in your view?
 
 Another example: if a
 person who is a [mosaic of `X` and `XY` cells](https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2190741/)
-has given birth to a child, what is their biological sex?
+has given birth to a child, what is the biological sex of the parent, and are
+they a mother, or a father?
 
 Yup, people can be several different karyotypes **at the same time**. Does this
 mean that they're multiple sexes at the same time? Do we take the most prevalent